The typography

The saga marks two voices by how they are set on the page rather than by who is speaking. Both are rare, both are load-bearing, and a reader skimming will miss both.

The cipher

A substitution alphabet, used three times, all in Acts 2 and 3.

• ch. 40, prose: Icarus looks at "the ꀘ꒐ꋊꍌ on his throne" = KING
• ch. 40, bracket: "His mind is already made up. ꀘ꒐꒒꒒ ꁝ꒐ꂵ" = KILL HIM
• ch. 41, bracket: "Bring them all to ꂵꏂ" = ME

All three are Akumu, and all three are the point where it stops watching and starts ordering. See The narrator.

The monospace

Styled Unicode from the Mathematical Alphanumeric block, used in exactly two chapters.

Ch. 134, "Rivers Through Time", uses it for 806 runs, which is most of the chapter. It marks Blook's side of a two-hander with Maeve, while her side stays in ordinary italics.

The chapter is the most important exposition in the saga. It is where Blook is revealed as the left part of Zero's brain and Illia as the right, where Illia is confirmed dead, and where Blook admits he has lost his powers.

Ch. 145, "The Difference", uses it for seven runs, including the closing bracket: "Mortals of your caliber are insects." That is Vazroth, who by Act 7 is back.

So the styling marks a voice speaking from outside ordinary existence. A ghost who is a fragment of a dead universe, and an ancient thing wearing somebody else.

Dialogue has a second format

The saga's ordinary form is a three-letter speaker tag: **FNR**: and then the line. Twelve chapters drop the tags entirely and put the dialogue in italics, with no attribution except what the surrounding prose supplies.

The archive counted them across both books.

Ch. 3 and ch. 57 and ch. 137 mix the two, each in a handful of lines against a clear majority of the other.

It is not a volume or a narrator convention. The twelve run from the Prologue to Act 8 and cover Blook alone in space (ch. 3), a camp guard's radio (ch. 39), a family at breakfast (ch. 57), Fenris's working day (ch. 81), and Blook and Maeve on the overlook (ch. 134).

What they have in common is that nobody in them needs identifying. These are two-handers, or crowd scenes where the speaker does not matter, or memories. Ch. 81 runs a whole day of a man's life through it, and the effect is that the neighbours and the customers arrive as voices rather than as characters, which is the point of the chapter.

Ch. 98 also drops the tags and uses italics, and is excluded from the count above because what is in italics there is a song rather than speech.

Ch. 117 prints one paragraph twice

The paragraph beginning "His eyes found the stranger's face, and in those impossible depths he saw something that made the physical pain meaningless" appears twice in ch. 117, word for word. It sits at the end of the chapter, and the two copies are separated by a four-word exchange:

JHN: You're... ???: You...

So the chapter reads the same closing beat, then two lines of interrupted dialogue, then the same closing beat again.

It is the only case in the saga. The archive compared every paragraph over two hundred characters in all 329 chapters against every other paragraph in the same chapter. Ch. 117 is the single chapter with a repeat.

Whether the repetition is deliberate, marking a moment Johann experiences twice as the spear goes in, or a paste that was never cleaned up, the chapter does not say. The archive does not alter chapters, so it is recorded here rather than fixed. See The possession of Johann.

Six chapters drop the bold from a tag

The standard form is **LIS**:. Nine lines across six chapters print the tag bare, as LIS:, with no emphasis.

They run from Acts 1 to 14, so this is a steady low rate of slip rather than a habit belonging to one stretch of the writing.

Ch. 114 shows the likely cause. The bare line is also the one where a paragraph of narration has been pasted onto the end of the dialogue instead of being split off, so the whole speech and the description after it sit in one block. The formatting failed where the paragraph break did.

Like the bracket variants, this matters only because a search for the standard form silently misses these lines.

Nine chapters have broken emphasis in the end marker

Every chapter closes with an italicised end-of-chapter line and its title. In nine of them the asterisks are malformed, producing runs of six or more in a row that no Markdown renderer resolves as intended.

Ch. 172's is typical: the title reads ***"I Will Not******.******"***, with the full stop wrapped in its own stray run.

The chapters are 28, 54, 121, 149, 172, 177, 181, 246 and 250, which spans both books and most volumes.

Like the bracket variants and the bare speaker tags, this matters only to a reader searching mechanically. The titles are intact; the emphasis around them is not.

Two chapters set the end marker in bold, not bold italic

335 chapters open the closing mark with three asterisks, ***End of Chapter. Two open it with two, **End of Chapter, and they are ch. 174 and ch. 342, one in each book and 168 chapters apart.

The mark itself is found by its words rather than by its emphasis, in the website and in the repository's own checks alike, so both read the line and neither ever reported the difference.

The difference is still visible, because the asterisks in front of the mark belong to the page rather than to the mark. Three of them on their own line are a thematic break, which draws the rule under the last paragraph of every chapter. Two of them are not a break, and ch. 174 ended, for as long as the website has existed, with a paragraph holding two asterisks and nothing else. The website now squares the run up.

This is the fourth variation in the closing furniture, after the bracket forms, the bare speaker tags, and the nine broken end markers above.

One name occurs once, in a slot that belongs to somebody else

Ch. 183 has Alexander describe a timeline where the tournament ended in draws, and credit the philosophy behind that to a person the saga never mentions anywhere else:

ALX: The philosophy Stiven always taught - restraint over violence, mercy over killing.

The archive checked all 329 chapters. The name occurs exactly once.

The philosophy described is Nilah's, and she is the teacher Alexander and Johann share. She is also the person he names in his previous line, alive in the crowd of the same imagined timeline.

It is also the given name of the saga's author, as recorded in the frontmatter of every chapter file under a pen name and in this repository's own history.

Nilah wins. Ch. 125 has "the restraint Nilah had drilled into him for years". The archive's corrected edition of ch. 183 has "The philosophy Nilah always taught". The line is still wrong on Wattpad.

Act 8 breaks chapters into ruled sections

Five chapters use horizontal rules inside the body to cut between viewpoints, and all five are in Act 8: ch. 171, ch. 175, ch. 179, ch. 180 and ch. 182. No chapter anywhere else in the saga does it.

Ch. 171 is the clearest case. Seven internal rules divide six unattributed first-person fragments, one per fighter, as Vazroth's presence forces each of them down. None of the six is named in their own section. They are identifiable only by what fails: obsidian cracking, poison proving irrelevant, soil pulling away, starlight being crushed, barriers shattering on manifestation, time being pressed flat.

Then a final rule, and the chapter resolves into Vazroth's first person for the rest of its length.

So the device is doing the chapter's argument. Six voices reduced to their symptoms and stripped of their names, then one voice that keeps its own.

Seven chapters carry only one speaker tag

A chapter with ten or more tagged lines and exactly one distinct tag is either a monologue or a conversation someone is having with themselves. The archive counted seven.

Ch. 123 is Nilah talking to two graves, so the single tag is simply that nobody answers.

Ch. 166 is the other kind. It is a genuine two-hander in which both speakers are Johann, one of them a fragment of the other, so the same three letters alternate down the page as dialogue. Four of the seven are his, which is a fair description of what Act 8 does to him.

Speaker tags are reused

The three-letter tag identifies a speaker inside a chapter and not across the saga. A reader who follows one through the corpus finds several people.

MRC is the worst case. The archive counted ten chapters, and they hold at least four different characters:

The two Marcuses are three centuries and one volume apart and share nothing but the name and the tag.

Three others are on record:

• VNC is Vincent Caruso in Acts 4 and 5 and Petra Vance in Acts 12 to 14.
• ELN is Icarus's mother in ch. 40 and Neru's mother Elena in ch. 72.
• ROS is Rosalind in ch. 286 to ch. 288 and Roselle in ch. 322. Both are in Acts 12 to 14 and thirty-four chapters apart, which is the closest together any reuse gets.

Nothing signals the change. The tag is an abbreviation of whatever name the chapter is using, so a search on the tag alone will merge people. Check the chapter, not the tag.

The reverse also happens: one character with two tags, and there are two cases.

Maeve is MAE in nine chapters, from ch. 105 to ch. 159, and MAV in exactly two, ch. 162 and ch. 182. Nothing distinguishes those two chapters. Both are Act 8, both are her in the same battle, and ch. 158 and ch. 159 either side of the first switch use MAE.

Lisa is LIS in seventeen chapters, ch. 105 to ch. 186, and LSA in seven, ch. 201 to ch. 208. That one does not interleave: the tag changes once and stays changed, with fifteen chapters between the last LIS and the first LSA.

So a search on a character's tag can both merge people and lose them.

Names are reused as well as tags, and the archive keeps finding more:

Ch. 12 is worth noting on its own: it holds a Vincent and a Sarah, and three hundred years later ch. 123 holds a different Sarah while ch. 83 holds a different Vincent. The two Sarahs are also in the same situation, each talked out of accurate work by a superior.

The closing bracket is universal

Every chapter in the saga ends with one. Counted again at ch. 344: 345 of 345, ch. 0 to ch. 344, with no exceptions. The Continuity, which both books publish as chapter -1, is an index rather than a chapter and has none.

The markup is not consistent, which is why a naive search undercounts them.

The count was 330 of 330 and the table was wrong when it was written, which is worth saying rather than quietly correcting. Three of the variants it misses are ch. 149, ch. 181 and ch. 271, and one more is ch. 285, all of them inside the ch. 0 to ch. 329 the first survey covered. It also filed ch. 40 and ch. 41 under **[** **... ]**, which is not their shape: their bold closes and reopens around the cipher glyphs in the middle of the line, **[ ... ** then the glyphs then **. ]**, and that is the cipher rather than a markup variant. See below.

Nothing between ch. 319 and ch. 344 departs from the standard form. Every correction above is to the range the first survey already had.

Some also run to two or three lines rather than one, including ch. 137 and ch. 169.

None of this appears to be meaningful. The variants do not track speaker, volume, or content. They are recorded here so that a later reader who searches for the standard form and finds gaps knows the gaps are formatting rather than missing brackets.

The one place the markup does carry meaning is the cipher above, in ch. 40 and ch. 41, where the glyphs inside the bracket are the message.

Ch. 228, where a word is broken in half

The mark above each bracket is written ***End of Chapter N***. Ch. 228 is written *E**nd of Chapter 228, because Wattpad writes one run of bold as several tags wherever the author edited inside it and here an edit landed between the E and the nd.

That is not a curiosity. It was a bug on the website for as long as the chapter has been up. The site finds the mark to strip the furniture under it, a plain search for the phrase cannot see this one, and with no mark found the whole of the closing furniture went to the page as prose: the reading ended on the mark and the chapter title in italic, with the narrator line under it in ordinary bold rather than in the aside the site draws for it. The same split feeds the search snippets, the search terms, the feed and the act's book.

Both copies of the rule, in site/src/lib/archive.ts and in tools/check.py, now allow a run of * or _ between any two characters of the phrase. The check had reported 344 of 345 chapters closing with a mark it could strip, and had recorded in its own docstring that one chapter carried none. It counts 345.

See The narrator for who is speaking in them.

Why this is recorded

Because it does not survive plain reading. A search for "Blook" will not find his lines in ch. 134, and tools/check.py counts the words without noticing which are set differently.

If you are quoting from ch. 134 or ch. 145, quote the styled characters as they are. Do not normalise them. They are the attribution.